Puzzle Pieces

Romeo and Juliet

We fit together perfectly,

but we come from different sets

I tremble at your touch,

yet we drift further apart

Reviews

[richieb]

Truthful words. Anticipation, hopeful longing, pain always looming in the background. These are the images your beautiful words reveal to me.
Peace,
Richie b.

[Hannah]

Thanks you richie. I'm sorry it took so long for me to respond. This poem is on my old account, and i don't make it a point to check it very often. Thank you for your review.

[Meshalini]

Amazing.... A meaningful poem...

Well done...

[Hannah]

Thank you, Meshalini.

[Manu]

Nice one, Hannah :-)
Two lovers from different worlds.
It is really painful to live without the one for whom we actually want to live.

A Sweet poem :-)

[Hannah]

Absolutely true, Gorthi. Thank you very much.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes you'll find love at strange places sometimes. Small yet beautiful and up to the mark. Wishing you Happy Christmas 🎅 and bright year ahead :)

[Hannah]

Thanks, Skyfall. Merry Christmas to you, too.

[d]

i like this and i believe i know the course it has taken. it is gentle and sad, but i think there is something very close to you that can beautifully ignite the fire. and it should! i am hoping you will find it.

[Hannah]

Thank you, a.l.

[.]

Short and simple....

A star-crossed love lost in a galaxy of stars...

Nicely written.

[Hannah]

You got the meaning just right. Thank you for reading, Doodley.

[Unknown Poet]

Thoughtful writing...creative work

[Hannah]

Thank you, Uday.

[Unknown Poet]

My pleasure Hannah ..

[TheShadowsWithin]

The title and the last lines in the last two stanzas make me think about the connection you're making. This is beautiful.

[Hannah]

Glad you think so. Thanks for reading.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

love this, very creative! Great picture too. Keep up the great work!

- Cyprian

[Hannah]

Thanks, Cyprian. Glad you enjoyed.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome

[Autonomous]

Don't you just hate it when you buy a puzzle and there's a piece missing, shipped in another box pulled apart by fate yet destined to be.

great poem Hannah sweet short and with enough emotion to twist a heart in agony. Once again Great work.

[Hannah]

Thank you very much, Zwsed.