Wonder

Ever wonder why,

The sky is so high?

 

Ever wonder why,

the birds fly?

 

Ever wonder why,

things die?

 

Ever wonder why,

Rain will never dry?

 

Ever wonder why,

A criminal will deny?

The things they do,

are never true.

The things they say,

will rot and decay.

 

Do you ever wonder why?

I never try.

I just say good-bye.

Reviews

[~Death Is The Key~]

wow this is a very interesting poem indeed but so moving and I wonder why I never seemed to deny the thought that is in my mind of why I never thought to see what you write on this site. But that will change I will visit your site more often and read all that you write. you can cout on that. Your friend that will read all your written work, Raven:D

[Brook Hughes]

This poem has an amazing flow to it. It was well written and very descriptive. Keep writing:)

[deeps]

I like this I thought it had an amazing flow to it.
Beuatifully written. I like the theme of it the best.
A write that makes one ponder.

[StoryTailor]

Hm... Well, I certainly wonder. Can't help it, it's in my nature.
*smiles* regardless, the poem is very nice. It flows well, it has a nice rhythm, and it rhymes. Not that it needed to, it's just a fact. Haha, it was a good read, I'm glad I took five seconds out of my life to read it. Good job writing it!

[BlackRose]

that last sentance sounds like you!

[SilentDreamer]

This is really cute. Makes you think...makes you wonder. Good flow. Great job.

[Jessie]

I really liked this write.. yes, I do wonder..too much I'm afraid, lol, but atleast we dont have to worry about running out of things to wonder about..lol.. Great job! thanks so much for sharing your write...

[Kat24]

Hi,
This is a very interesting poem. Kat24