I love you

Five and a half months of this

of us.

And we're still so young.

I heard that life goes on

whether you want to go with it

or not.

But I think this time

just this time,

maybe life is waiting for us.

Maybe life is a patient being.

Maybe we can take our time.

Five months 

and twelve days

prior to today,

I remembered how to love you.

I laid under the stars

wrapped in you

and your love

and I remembered us.

Reviews

[Dayran]

To remember love, once upon a time, is an experience that brings with it great spirit and colors. But where it waits for you, such a love has a longer-term meaning and love. Love certainly would be delighted to know that we remember it, but at the same time, I believe it may also want to be assured that it remembers us. Nice write!

[CHRIS ANDES]

very sweet
=]

[Lydia]

Great write.

[LilMissWriter17]

This is beautiful! :)

[Sagar Waingankar]

Love is a decent emotion. Remembering it derives jumbled memories from the past. This one is pretty simple and sweet illustration of a relation that will remain pure for long! Beautiful write!

[~Lizzy♬]

Awww! This poem is beautiful! :) I love the whole thing.

~Lizzy~

[Raya Avans]

This was simple and cute :) Well done!

Raya