Leash

THings that are happening in my life.

My leash has just be cut short another inch. Soon I'll be losing breath.

The world is coming out from under me.

I am tired of you telling me what to do!

I want to be my own person!

Leave me BE!!!

I won't live by your words anymore.

I'm sick.

I'm tired.

 I want to curl up in a ball and die.

I'm tired of this life style. 

I want my leash gone!

I want to be by myself.

Author's Note

Things at home aren't going so well.

Reviews

[Amy Bumpas]

This sounds like a very destructive relationship.
Like someone who is submissive, now wants their
own way away from their master. Whatever the reason,
I really hope this works out. No body should be disrobed to
not being themselves or true to who they are.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime when the leash is too tight. The beast may attack the master. I like this poem. Strong and with a purpose. A outstanding poem. I like the ending a lot.
Coyote

[Halkhend]

i was feeling it i love the way you got rite to the point and just wrote what you felt

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This was truth. I really love the way you just yelled everything out. Real poetry is just saying how you feel and you did a really good job of that in this. This was very...pure.(: Yes pure. And I enjoyed FEELING something when I read this, really feeling something for the writer.

I am tired of you telling me what to do!

I want to be my own person!

I enjoyed these words the most. When I was in middle school I was experimenting a lot with image, and my mom was so stuck on me looking like a certain thing, being a certain thing and not drifting off into something that, god forbid, someone might judge her about. So I really enjoyed these lines, they reminded me of a personal experience which is good when it comes to poetry.

Great job(:

[Nae Nae]

This is so passionate. It is short but it reveals so much about how you feel. It tells a lot of truth. Keep it up!


Nae-Nae ...

[Sean M. Addams]

very powerful piece I just wanted to reach in and hug ... derips with lots of emotion.... overall a very strong piece.