On topic: I like this! You wrote simply and straightforwardly, and the message that you aimed to put out came through loud and clear because of that.
I love the lead-in using the title as the first line, and starting off every stanza that followed as a continuation of the first line. It was solid; it worked well.
Good, concise writing, Hannah!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Asante! I appreciate your thoughtful and kind review.
I love it, life without regret is truely the best.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Very true. It can be hard to not let the past get to you, but fretting about things that have alread.. read moreVery true. It can be hard to not let the past get to you, but fretting about things that have already happened won't get us anywhere. Thanks for reading.
On topic: I like this! You wrote simply and straightforwardly, and the message that you aimed to put out came through loud and clear because of that.
I love the lead-in using the title as the first line, and starting off every stanza that followed as a continuation of the first line. It was solid; it worked well.
Good, concise writing, Hannah!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Asante! I appreciate your thoughtful and kind review.
Hey there!
I'm a twenty-year-old English major. I consider myself to be friendly and accepting, so feel free to talk to me about anything or send me a friend or read request. I don't always have mu.. more..