The pain of loss when a relationship ends… The worst part is the end of hope, the lost promise – that makes finding closure almost impossible. There’s never a finality to the grief of a lost relationship. We can find a new path, and move on, maybe even put the pain behind us, looking forward in new joys. But, how do you find closure when someone just walks away?
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Very thoughtful review, Momzilla. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
s0me0ne came in 0ur life. make his/her place. make that place so mean t0 us. speard his/herself in us. beat in 0ur heart beats. 0ur ear always hear his/her v0ice. 0ur eyes always see his/her sight . after he/she left. we saround by his/her thoughts , love , words and care. war begins bw our love and our end. we just have to say thank you for everything. Thank you for rhe love and pain. Thank you for your words and your deeds. but we can't forget our loved ones 😔 your work done its work hannah. a beautiful work 👍
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6 Years Ago
Very well said, Naveed. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.
The pain of loss when a relationship ends… The worst part is the end of hope, the lost promise – that makes finding closure almost impossible. There’s never a finality to the grief of a lost relationship. We can find a new path, and move on, maybe even put the pain behind us, looking forward in new joys. But, how do you find closure when someone just walks away?
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Very thoughtful review, Momzilla. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Made my heart hurt reading this. The line that seems all too real is, "I'm left with your scent on my clothes."
Even when someone leaves, they always leave reminders behind.
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6 Years Ago
It's true that people always leave things behind when they go. Thanks for leaving your thoughts.
catchy title. love lost imprisons us. matters of the heart are always difficult as captured in your words. well written and effective in expressing the longing and sadness.
The feelings portrayed in this poem are infinitely relatable; a love that was so full of promise having now been reduced to only memory, yet the heart within still remains imprisoned to the affections of the departed lover.
Simple in its eloquence and with nothing more to say...
A finely poignant poem. Nicely written.
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6 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Doodley! You got the meaning of the poem just right. Your review is pretty eloq.. read moreThank you very much, Doodley! You got the meaning of the poem just right. Your review is pretty eloquent, itself.
this for me was a deep read. beautiful read and love the choice of words used
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Jackie. I'm glad you enjoyed reading.
7 Years Ago
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