They are not scared of being lonely They are not scared of being alone They are not scared of being the only
They prefer the company of nature alone They communicate within themselves while alone Though they could enjoy the company of others from behind alone
Whenever they become the only in a world known to none, They listen deep to their hearts, souls and minds Realizing what their hearts wants and what needs to be done
Their views about others stays within them alone Their fears could not be noticed by others but them alone Their happiness could be noticeable but could not be to the world
Their world is mystery to the others Their silence is speaking in their world They are lonely, alone and the only but they are not
I love how you unravel the definition of "Introverts". It is sometimes hard to explain how introvert feel in simple words but your poem have done the job well. Great write, my omo naija.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thanks Mirror.
Your review has a great impact on me.
Nothing wrong with being an introvert....finding a balance between the two extremes is the key to a fulfilling life.
This is a nice start to your cafe life. I enjoyed the piece and your use of repetition to enforce the title and theme of your poem. Just don't make repetition a poetic habit. It is a device best used sparingly in poetry and then only to maximise a thought.
Nice work.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thanks Doodley. I appreciate your review.
It means so much to me.
This is AMAZING!!!!!! I relate so much to it... I like how the words at the ends of the sentences don't rhyme exactly, but they still flow together. There really is a whole other world inside their heads... this is filled with exquisite wisdom and beautiful everything. Thank you for writing this!
Turning everything some think of as negative about an introvert, into the positive it is. Maybe their just happy with who they are and wish others understood that? I understand and appreciated this read, you express those sentiments and feelings very well. Thank you for the read.
There fears could not be noticed by others but them alone
There world is a mystery to others
My favorite lines
I really like the poem and you have expressed your feeling very well .
There are many types of the introverts in this world the things they all have in common is that they don't like to show there true feelings . They think its convenient that way just so that they wont come into light. Darkness is there true nature the one they have been born with, so its a crime to judge them for it.
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