THEY ARE LONELY,ALONE AND THE ONLY

THEY ARE LONELY,ALONE AND THE ONLY

A Poem by Haneefah

They are not scared of being lonely
They are not scared of being alone
They are not scared of being the only

They prefer the company of nature alone
They communicate within themselves while alone
Though they could enjoy the company of others from behind alone

Whenever they become the only in a world known to none,
They listen deep to their hearts, souls and minds
Realizing what their hearts wants and what needs to be done

Their views about others stays within them alone
Their fears could not be noticed by others but them alone
Their happiness could be noticeable but could not be to the world

Their world is mystery to the others
Their silence is speaking in their world
They are lonely, alone and the only but they are not

They are the introverts.

© 2017 Haneefah


Author's Note

Haneefah
This could be a sorry and pathetic excuse for a poem but your corrections will build me up.

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A lovely descriptive poem about what being an introvert is. Wonderful insight. Bless you, for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


First, I love the Title!!!!

I love how you unravel the definition of "Introverts". It is sometimes hard to explain how introvert feel in simple words but your poem have done the job well. Great write, my omo naija.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Haneefah

6 Years Ago

Thanks Mirror.
Your review has a great impact on me.
Mirror

6 Years Ago

Always welcome.
Nature is a best companion, when in presence of nature one doesn't need anyone. Beautifully written, I liked this poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Haneefah

6 Years Ago

Thanks Najam.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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Nothing wrong with being an introvert....finding a balance between the two extremes is the key to a fulfilling life.

This is a nice start to your cafe life. I enjoyed the piece and your use of repetition to enforce the title and theme of your poem. Just don't make repetition a poetic habit. It is a device best used sparingly in poetry and then only to maximise a thought.

Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Haneefah

6 Years Ago

Thanks Doodley. I appreciate your review.
It means so much to me.
This is AMAZING!!!!!! I relate so much to it... I like how the words at the ends of the sentences don't rhyme exactly, but they still flow together. There really is a whole other world inside their heads... this is filled with exquisite wisdom and beautiful everything. Thank you for writing this!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Haneefah

6 Years Ago

Thanks Sparkly.ghost, This means so much to me
Turning everything some think of as negative about an introvert, into the positive it is. Maybe their just happy with who they are and wish others understood that? I understand and appreciated this read, you express those sentiments and feelings very well. Thank you for the read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Haneefah

6 Years Ago

Thanks Karen Redburn. I appreciate your review.
There fears could not be noticed by others but them alone
There world is a mystery to others
My favorite lines
I really like the poem and you have expressed your feeling very well .
There are many types of the introverts in this world the things they all have in common is that they don't like to show there true feelings . They think its convenient that way just so that they wont come into light. Darkness is there true nature the one they have been born with, so its a crime to judge them for it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Haneefah

6 Years Ago

Thanks Mallishka, this means so much to me.
Haneefah

6 Years Ago

Your words are so encouraging.
Malvika

6 Years Ago

my pleasure

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