YOU

raw just open blood from my soul

deep so deep you know

torn and just ripped to shreds

nothing left not even threads

cheated on and with nerve to even steal

you took more then whats real

we, that would be my son and me,

showed you love and gave it all free

but you took our stuff cuz s**t went wrong

you cheated on me as you did all along

karma dude it comes with a bite

to let you know you wasn't right

you'll remember me when you lie down to sleep

and all the drugs you took your heart can't keep

as you close your eyes it's my tears you see

and nothing you do will set you free

you who caused me such a deep emotional pain

who laughed at each turn so full of game

when you thought you were finely free

and you close your eyes it's gonna be me you see

reminding you that when you hurt a woman and make her cry

it will follow you even after the day you die...

so twist it,make it this or that, any way that you so choose

after it's all over, I know, it's before God, that you loose!

Reviews

[Horizons]

The pain's coming from your inside, it showed how much pain your've passed through, in the today's world, when you expect something from someone or anyone you just get hurt from that one because the pain's now floating in everyone's heart which's further coming from the heart. People hurt everyone, spoil other's life and think they're having just some for fun.. but day by day, they start hurting everyone in a big arena and give the birth to crime, in today's world, the crime's everywhere, women're not safe but what made this.. ! what brought this crime! it's we... it's a mankind who's forgetting humanity and giving a new birth to a crime, to evils and men're mostly spoiling the women life's admittedly... there's need to change the thinking, there's need to think positive about everyone especially about women, man should know how the pain a woman faces when she's in the edge of crime... man should know how much a woman does for a man and what a man gives her in reply .. nothing.. but.. Hurt and pain.. that's all...
This's a piece came from your heart which was feeling damn pain coz of someone... i felt the poem and your these two lines just ripped off my heart

reminding you that when you hurt a woman and make her cry
it will follow you even after the day you die...

due to your these two lines, the whole poem's became so much powerful so, am just gonna save this poem right now.. you've a voice to get your right, to live freely your life. There's a nice msg you've conveyed to stop the crime in the world... thanks for making the piece and sharing with us. I felt the poem and it's really very powerful poem. Thanks, i appreciate your poem and thinking. May god bless yu and i hope everything's well now with your life. Be safe and happy.
Have a smiley day!

[Leila Skye]

I feel the pain.