Nice work Hanan, the seasons take shape like a cloud in the Oklahoma sky. I noticed on line 4 you must of meant life's little secrets. Thanks for the comment...Raul
This is a enticing and marvelously written poem, the love that seems to pour out of you. I hope your son appreciate's you with all his heart...
~Smiley :)
A most loving, embracing and beautifulyl spoken work of heart hannan. your words are touching, sweet, and embracing as only the love of a mother could possess. I loved this, brilliantly done.
Simple...I love to write! Some it may please and then some I am sure it won't, but this is why one of my favorite quotes from a particular book is "Approval not required or Desired!" I do appreciate .. more..