drip

Emotions felt during an intense moment

Hush.

Listen.

Drip

       Drip

               Drip

                       The slow dripping of wet hair on the carpet.

Drip

        Drip

                Drip

                        The waterfall of tears cascading on the duvet.

Drip

       Drip

              Drip

                      The sounds of a bleeding heart on the tarmac.

Drip

       Drip

              Drip

                      Did you hear me when you turned your back?

Author's Note

Another 5 minute rant

Reviews

[DJ]

I like the format you used in this piece, the dripping heightens the emotions in this piece, putting in emphasis. Sad, emotional, well penned piece :)

[Ted]

a nice raindrop of poetry

[Hana Saemon]

Aww thank you! :)

[Broken Wings]

I like the cascade in this piece, its short but powerful. Pretty good for a 5 minute rant. Writing is a great way to let those out :)