You and me, we are the same

You and me, we are the same

A Poem by Hana Saemon
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Just something i wrote when i read about the atrocities happening around the world, the war, the pain, the sufferings, racism etc.

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You and me, we are the same

 

When Alex Ferguson announced his retirement,

We sighed and groaned,

Lamenting on the future of United,

Holding our heads while we moaned.

 

We have loved,

And we have lost,

We had done things,

At a cost.

 

Your eyes sparkled in excitement,

I laughed in amusement,

We cried out in amazement,

Caught up in the moment.

 

And when the sun rises,

We too rise,

And when the sun sets,

In bed we lie.

 

You see,

We are the same,

You and I,

Different only by name.

 

Maybe too, by the colour of our skin,

Maybe by the colour of our hair,

Maybe by the educational qualifications we hold,

Maybe by the burdens we bear.

 

Your sun may rise,

When mine goes down.

Maybe the size of my jeans

Are bigger than yours by one.

 

But how does that make you different,

When my blood is as red as yours,

How does it give me the right,

To take your land by force?

So you see,

We are the same,

You and I,

Different only by name.

© 2013 Hana Saemon


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Fergie grabbed my attention and got me smiling, but "maybe by the educational qualifications we hold" caused me to let out a little chuckle - it's a great line.

I know that's not the intention of the poem and it is, of course, very sincere in its message - one which I can agree with for the most part. A good piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hana Saemon

11 Years Ago

i did intend for it to hold a bit of humor and im glad you picked up on it and chuckle. :) it's grea.. read more
Nirego

11 Years Ago

I feel a little better knowing that! In that case I need to add the phrase, "Clever use of humour to.. read more
Hana Saemon

11 Years Ago

thank you! :)



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Fergie grabbed my attention and got me smiling, but "maybe by the educational qualifications we hold" caused me to let out a little chuckle - it's a great line.

I know that's not the intention of the poem and it is, of course, very sincere in its message - one which I can agree with for the most part. A good piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hana Saemon

11 Years Ago

i did intend for it to hold a bit of humor and im glad you picked up on it and chuckle. :) it's grea.. read more
Nirego

11 Years Ago

I feel a little better knowing that! In that case I need to add the phrase, "Clever use of humour to.. read more
Hana Saemon

11 Years Ago

thank you! :)
what an exceptional poem. I loved the message that comes across in this poem. We are all the same.(also loved the ManU part, haha)
Fantastic write. :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hana Saemon

11 Years Ago

haha im glad u love the man utd part. see, we are all the same from whichever land we come from, and.. read more
annabellee

11 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
What a beautifully written poem of brotherhood this is. We all have similarities, don't we? We all laugh and cry and love and we all want to live peacefully in this world. I enjoyed this write very much. LydI**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hana Saemon

11 Years Ago

thank you lydia! exactly. we are all the same, and if we all realise it, the world will be a more pe.. read more

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Hana Saemon

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