Reminiscences

Reminiscences

A Poem by Hamkar
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This started out from a picture which developed into describing a feeling of the goddess Sedna after being confined to the sea.

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Rhythmic waves sway

Marine animals wail

Sedna arises


 

Azure atmosphere

A transparent sunset cloak

Imprisoned anger

 

Lashing at her life

Fate has resurfaced once more

Combing her hair through

 

Reminiscences

Beset by her disownment

What could have been bliss

 

Clouds of doubt mingle,

Weave between time and senses

Silence once again 

© 2012 Hamkar


Author's Note

Hamkar
I am not quite sure on this one... It isn't quite perfect, and I'm not so sure on the title. Suggestions?

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Added on August 9, 2011
Last Updated on February 10, 2012

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Hamkar
Hamkar

Nelson, New Zealand



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