My Special Friend

This is a poem for who those has a special friend like me. I have been working on this poem for, like a month and I hope, you will enjoy it when you are reading my poem that I have been working on.

My Special Friend

Just For Fun... :)

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I have a friend,
A brother-like friend,
Since we met, no matter where,
He will always be there,

He takes me into the sky,
Side by side, we fly,
Above the clouds, soaring high,
With relaxation one cannot buy,

We often go wind-riding,
Rather than roller-coasting,
With the soft breeze kissing,
The touch, soothing,

Rock and roll, we go crazy,
The beat in the heart, unstoppable,
Follow the rhythm, shake your body,
This is life, enjoyable,

He takes me to the scenes,
Replacing the cinema screens,
Imagination runs rampage,
And I sit there, still like a grandfather clock,

Along the streets, resembling the army,
We march, shoulder by shoulder,
With pomp, perfectly,
Focused, the qualities of a commander,

When I am weary, he raises my spirits,
Erase negative emotions, diminish those dimwits,
Then I will stand strong,
To fight the wildest storm that comes along,

He will be beside me, the night light dim,
Keeping me company,
While I doze off to dream,
To build my castle in the middle of the vast sea.
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Reviews

[hisyam]

I guess i know who the person you meant..hahaha

[Kelly Kat]

I absolutely love this!
I love how each stanza has its own format and you don't adhere to only one. That makes it so interesting to read. Each one works perfectly and they end up flowing together flawlessly.

The only thing I would suggest tweaking is this section:

'When I am weary, he raises my spirits,
Erase negative emotions, diminish those dimwits,'

The tense shift is a little awkward..
I think it would read better as:

'When I am weary, he'll raise my spirits,
Erase negative emotions, diminish those dimwits,'

Same meaning but it flows a little better because the three actions flow more seamlessly.

Overall I love it :) Great job!

[Autonomous]

If this friend is important to you then never lose then, I lost my friend to the darkness of League of legends #never forget #just trolling. Sorry for my bad humor but seriously in this world good friends are rare to see. I enjoyed the poem and it's message was not written in vain. Keep up the great work.

[Shawn Crider]

Touching. Heart Warming. I enjoyed this, it made me smile.