Life

This is a poem that will give you an realisation"Why do you live on this earth?". I hope you will enjoy it, the short poem that I have made it by myself and make sure to share it with other people. :)

Life

Why am I here

In this place

In this country

In this city

In this moment

Today, I wonder what is the reason behind

Every flower

Every being

Every breath

Every movement

These days, life is

Full of mysterious

Full of secrets

A million questions full in my mind

Everyday and all this time

I'm wondering why am I exist

The only way to find an answer is by questioning yourself

Which are made and we never even find it

I keep breathing

I keep smiling

I keep feeling

I keep crying

I will live

and the best way that I can is to be patient

cause life is to legate between life and nature

and every details that all matters on this earth

maybe that is the answer

life is to live

to live in the maze and a beautiful adventure

soon I will be gone

and all I want is to make sure that I live with a happy feelings

that is why I wanted lived

and that is what matters to me

to risk my life for the answers on this earth

Reviews

[Natasha]

Your layout is very unique and I like how it looks. I like how this poem makes the reader think. Just a suggestion: in your lines, "Everyday and all this time I'm wondering why am I exist" the word choice is a bit confusing. I think it would make more sense if it said, "I'm wondering why I exist." Even with the few grammatical errors, I really enjoyed the poem. I liked how it drew you in and made you think. Keep up the good work!

[Shawn Crider]

Really good! Almost an answer but also not an answer just a realisation. It rocks!!

[Hamizan1705]

Thanks for reviewing my poem... I really appreciate it... :3