Women

I quick peak at women...

Women

 

Women, are beautiful gifts from God

They are strong, sweet, caring, and loving,

Their smile will light up a room,

When you're hurt they help you,
When you're sad they encourage you,

They come in many shapes and sizes,

No matter what people say, all women are beautiful,

They can sooth a hardened haert,

but they will scold evil,

They have a great sense of compassion and fashion,

They sacrafice everything in their lifetimes,

They go through the hardest pains of all,

They are very intellegent and athletic,

They can easily get ride of others lonliness,

A hug from a women is always so great to have,

Overall Women complete men, whether or not they admit it,

Author's Note

Eh, it didnt go very far

Reviews

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

wow great poem. i smiled at every line of it. :3

[Kesha]

This is very sweet! I enjoyed reading it! :)

[Once upon a time]

Aw, a very sweet poem! I made me blush.

Just a couple errors you may want to fix when you have time:

-----When you're hurt they help you,
-----When you're sad they encourage you,
-----whether or not they admit it

[Lovelylies;]

Love this, made me smile :) i just spent the day with a few sexist pigs so its good to know there are at least a few men who appreciate women

There is a spelling error They can easily get ride

[Andrew Wright]

Truth, simply and completely. This is a wondrous piece of work.

[SimplyDisastrous]

Very touching poem. So sweet and so true. Thank you for writing this. It's definitely going into my favorites. (:

Kristen

[Closed Account]

I love this. You wrote this really well(:
Great job!!!

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

thank you ha ha its true

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

this is totaly true :)

Women DO complete men

:)
AWESOME POEM :)