I'm better alone

I'm better alone

A Poem by Half Dream

I'm getting very tired

of people saying I don't care

of people thinking that I'll leave

even when I say I'll still be there

 

I've getting very annoyed

with people thinking that I'm gone

so maybe, just maybe, I should leave

maybe I'm better off alone.

© 2012 Half Dream


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Ah! I hate seeing beautiful angels feel so alone. Well ... if am here then loneliness's not there! Ha! Ah! I know, people're bad and so sucking but dear one, if you've good friends then believe me, life's awesome because I happen to know that friends really help us getting outa the worst situations cause, it's friends either who put us into the worst situations so, no need to worry, pretty an awesome star. Just close your eyes and take a long deep breathe because everyday's not as same as yesterday so, let the worst time go into the ashes and you just come outta there and again go and make the world beautiful with your scents :)

This poem's yes great and I really loved it not because your're sad but when Am sad then me too sometimes, write such kinda pieces and this piece's very painful and heartfelt .. I've felt the pain of the poem ...

"(O' there you bad bad world, please don't hurt angels .. I can't see the angels with tears...Hey there you painful world, go and wake up and make the angels happy because the world's balanced and surviving only because of angels so, wake-up n make the angels happy n keep 'em always safe and smiley)"
Ha!

Maya, Please, don't sad. Your awesome, don't worry, what the hell n whatsoever the hell people say ..just hear the voice of your heart and your heart always says that "Your the best in the world!" :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This gives a time to reflect on yourself... there's no one better than you that understands... if you are a person of faith... then there's one that does answer, but the road to that again comes upon you...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Half Dream

11 Years Ago

I agree! Thanks again for the review. :)
I can understand this piece, nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heart touching poem.
I can understand the feelings behind the words.


Posted 12 Years Ago



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