For Elisa

For Elisa

A Poem by Half Dream
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For my beautiful friend Elisa! :)

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Soft knocks on the doors of imagination
Has thrown me the door to enter
Stood on the threshold of speech
Wore a beauty of all its details
Blended inside me pull of sisters love
Showered my loss fields and it yielded
It's time to picking it up and taste it
Except I did not find way
To thank you dear..
Mumbled the words "Thank you"
Up to the sky, wondering if you could hear me.

© 2014 Half Dream


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Your friend 'Lisa' would be feelings proud to be your friend. This write shows how true friend you are. Very nice thinking you've got about friends.

May god always bless your both angel's friendships! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Half Dream

10 Years Ago

As always thank you for your kind words. Yeah, actually I'm the one who is proud of her. She added a.. read more
This is a lovely tribute to a wonderful woman and poetess!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Half Dream

10 Years Ago

She really IS and so much more. Thanks for reading. :)
Hi dear, aw, what a beautiful little poem, you made here so so so sweet!! thank you with whole my heart.... I feel happy to be a part of your life Sister. Many thanks xxxxx Love you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Half Dream

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome sis. The pleasure is all mine for being a part of your life. I love you too swee.. read more

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Added on December 14, 2013
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