I'm not a sponge!!

I'm not a sponge!!

A Poem by Half Dream





You always ask me 
Why am I laughing?!!! 
A question asked a lot on my ears, 
Why I welcome my problems with a smile 
Or with a laugh 
But what I hold deep inside is unaware around me.. 
My answer is: I'm not a sponge!! 
When days soaks me up with it largest small drops of water, 
My sponge does absorb only excitements stuff for happiness, 
With seductive fun, 
And that keep me awaken drunk,
So I face my problems with ridicule laugh 
only to the psychological impact on the beat, 
Our problems need a martial art called "Smile "

© 2014 Half Dream


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What a great thought to write about dear friend... this is very unique, some say a sponge is like to absorb in al wisdom, but why not happiness? this write made me smile.

And I love that ending, one to "defeat"
"our problems"

Lovely work here, as always my dear!

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

10 Years Ago

Oh my goodness!! I'm glad this piece was able to shine your day. :)

Thank you sweetpie.. read more

10 Years Ago

I love to read your work darlin!!! you're ever so welcome tight hug back to you! ♥



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Oh my dearest pretty, I hate seeing when someone calls ya sponge .. i hate even those either who don't have sense how to treat angels and how to praise their beauty. Yeah, I know you ain't a sponge but yourself a heaven! Your eyes're what where people watch the world, ears're what through which people hear the sound of love, your nose's what as soft as a rose that scents the scent of flowers and love as well around the world... your lips're what that tell everyone "You too are a human and you too have your rights living the life yourself." (By the way, yeah, your lips're soft and sizzling as well.. sorry I forgot to mention .. Ha! )
"(Joke)"
Your body's as same as a leaf, hands as cold as an ocean, wrist as thin as an angel, fingers as long as a queen, waist as soft and smooth as same as a deer and the walk of yours's what that let the people fall into heaven from the earth when you walk and smiles just as same as a "Soft little pretty Sparrow." :)

Oh sorry i forgot, yeah, your legs're what that make the earth gold and foots're what that mark or imprint the soil to let the soil spread the beauty of yours into the world in the form of diff. diff. colors to take breathe to live just and just and on your 'Beneath.' :)

Your the best in the world!



Posted 10 Years Ago


Half Dream

10 Years Ago

Omg!!! I'm speechless here.. *blushes*
Hehe I love this!! I know exactly what you mean and I adore people like you! very well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


Half Dream

10 Years Ago

Aww thank you very much. :)
What a great thought to write about dear friend... this is very unique, some say a sponge is like to absorb in al wisdom, but why not happiness? this write made me smile.

And I love that ending, one to "defeat"
"our problems"

Lovely work here, as always my dear!

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

10 Years Ago

Oh my goodness!! I'm glad this piece was able to shine your day. :)

Thank you sweetpie.. read more

10 Years Ago

I love to read your work darlin!!! you're ever so welcome tight hug back to you! ♥

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