Whispering voice inside me!

I feel something is going to happen

Perhaps its going to happen to me

But something is pressing strongly on the airway

Makes inhalation difficult to process

I feel strange!

As if the tons placed on my chest

Whispering voice inside me

I'm not okay!

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

its very important to listen very carefully.. our subconscious only speaks in whisper of things that concern us the most..

this sounds like the typical fear of not having control of our lives.. believe me i know.. dont let such angst, take your breath away.. that should be held only for things joyful and wondrous

great piece

Antonio

[Coyote Poetry]

The mind will whisper warnings. Good to listen to your internal thoughts. I like the description in the poem. I could feel the fear of something unknown a-coming. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Wolfwind]

You have a powerful poem here that creates a tangible scene. The weight upon oneself, especially the air way or the chest speaks to me of heavy emotional thoughts, the kind that are hard to work through. I've found it's always good to get them out as sometimes it's the only way to release the pressure. You craft poetry well. =)

Hope and light,
Aaron

[Revery]

Wow, is this just a poem or reality? This grips me and concerns me dear, hope your okay and this is just a strong write. Very intense write that grabs the reader.