Waiting

Just a poem I threw together, I will edit it later but right now I have powerful emotions and I love to write when I feel like this. There will be mistakes and I'm sorry for that.

I wait for you

I wait for your text

I wait for your calls

I wait for you to tell me everything is okay

But it's not...is it? 

You get angry when I don't text you first

Do you know why I don't text you first?

Because deep down I want you to text me

So I know at least you are thinking of me

I spend hours hoping for something...anything

But it never comes

At first I longed to stand by your side

But that is when you showed me your true colors

Or lack of them anyway

Try as I may it doesn't last

Will we ever end up together

And be a happy couple for once

A hurtful truth is better than a painful lie

Men look with their eyes

And women listen with their ears

It is why women wear makeup

And men tell lies

I sit here writing this horrible poem

With no rhyme, or even a theme

But as I type, I still wait for you

I wait for you

I wait for your text

I wait for your calls

I wait for you to tell me everything is okay

But it's not...is it? 

Author's Note

Ignore all the mistakes, I know there are a lot. I'm looking for how it made people feel.

Reviews

[Ian H Morrison]

love it this is the style of poetry that i really like free style written of the cuff. You can feel the raw emotion within every word that you have typed i can feel the pain that you have suffered from this person. lovely poem by the way

[HaleythePoet]

Thank you for the review. I often write my best poetry when I am feeling strong emotions like this.

[Ian H Morrison]

would appreciate the favour returned please i think i have now commented on all your works