I'm In Love

I'm In Love

A Chapter by Haley C
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This one is in Selena's Point Of View :) This is in the same timeline as the last chapter, like whats happening when we go to Nick and Misty, before Misty realized she loved Nick. :)

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Friday was the best night of my life. Justin took me to see a movie and then we went bowling. Of course I suck at it but it gave Justin an excuse to wrap his arms around me. I hope that we can go on another date some time. It's Monday now and I have to wait an hour before he's coming to get me, I was still trying to decide what to wear, because I want to look amazing! I heard Misty shout to Nick saying hi. Those two need to date already, it's driving me crazy how they are not together yet! I finally found the perfect outfit, black skinny jeans, a blue tank top with a black vest and blue converse. I quickly got dressed and straightened my long black hair, then did my makeup and I heard a car honk. I ran to my window and saw Justin's SUV in the driveway, he honked again and I grabbed my bag. I ran down the stairs and opened the door. I waved at him and I got in the vehicle.
"Hi, what's going on?" He asked, I smiled.
"Not much, just going to school." We laughed and he pulled out of the driveway. "How was the weekend?"
"Not good, my uncle sang again." I laughed and shook my head. "He's horrible, like two cats in a cat fight." He pulled into the parking lot for the school. We got out and I heard Nick screaming. I ran over and saw Misty on the ground holding her jaw. 
"Misty? I'm gonna bring you to the hospital." She nodded and Nick walked over to Justin. "Dude please?"
"Yeah, get in." He got in the back with Misty. "Selly do you want to come?" I nodded and got in the passenger seat, I looked back at Nick.
"What happened?" I asked, Misty had fallen asleep.
"Zach got mad at us because she was with me and not him. He went to punch me after I punched him in the nose, she jumped in front of me and I think he broke her jaw." Nick looked like he was about to start crying thinking it was his fault. I felt so bad but didn't know what to say. 
"Zach's a loser, he deserves whatever he gets. It's not your fault Nick."
"I feel like it is though! She jumped in front of me trying to protect me, I could've handled it." He was holding her hand while she was sleeping on his lap, they already look like a couple. We got to the hospital and Nick went in with Misty.
"Selena wait." Justin said, I turned to him. "I know this is a bad time to ask but I was wondering if you wanted to go on another date with me?" I smiled big.
"Yeah, I would love to." I knew at that moment I was in love with Justin Martin.


© 2011 Haley C


Author's Note

Haley C
Ok, this ending seems to familiar ;) Haha, Selena's chapters aren't gonna be very long because the story is mostly about Nick and Misty. Does anyone think I'm moving to fast for the relationship? And who's your favorite character so far? Mine's Nick :) Please Review! PS Dark Rose, when people want something in a story I usually try to incorporate it, like Crystal Marie wanted someone to kick Zach in the shins :)

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...I am a little confused because in the previous chapter Misty was talking to Nick about her Uncle singing terribly and then Selena said pretty much the same thing...
Anyways, awesome chapter and I can't wait for more! Do your best!!! =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Well, thank you for incorporating it. It made me smile so wide my cheeks hurt and I clapped my hands with glee. :) And yes, I sort of think you ARE moving the relationship too fast. It would help if there was some iternal struggle between the characters, to make the romance a little more realistic. My favorite character is...hmmm...oh, this is a hard one....I would say Selena or Nick. :) Good job! You're right, the ending was VERY familiar ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Haley C
Haley C

Northfield, VT



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My name is Haley, my friends call me Hal. I like to write stories and sometimes poems but I am self concious sometimes. Blah blah blah haha you'll know me better once you read my stories and poems. I .. more..

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