Death is Solitude (Sorry for those who have read this on my other page i had forgot my info)

Alot of people pissed me off at school so i wrote this on my anger so i wouldnt hurt anybody.

Death is the only solitude in a life we all find horrible we all escape to it sometime. We follow our believes and it leads us to death. We are chased by the devil as he leads us into hell. I question which is better "Here" or "There"... I still have not determined it but for today so far its "There." Hell is a better solitude then "Here" For i am afraid to kill the Innocent, Young, Stupid,and Childish people. I would rather kill "There" then "Here"

Reviews

[boyinblue]

I don't think we would ever know which place is better until we are there. That's just my opinion. I don't think Hell is better either, life gets better as you grow, as you get away from family and old friends for a while. You need something different to stimulate your mind, it happens to us all. Hell, if there is one, is considered the worst place one could ever reach, so I get your metaphorical meaning I think. You're saying even though Hell is the worst place, it is better as compared to here, which is to say that 'here' is worse than hell. Pretty thought out, I like the insight
Good poem, keep it up.

[Jeremiah hisel]

I don't really believe in hell as a "place," but this poem is really thought out and it has a lot of emotion behind it.

[MunkeeFareek]

I'm not sure what to think. Very good poem, though.