Mommy, No!

A very short story of a mother's suicide.

"Mommy, can I sleep with you?" Little Mary-Ann asked.
"No. Not tonight."
"Why?"she asked. She sleep with her all the time when she had nightmares.
"I said No! No! No!" Her mom yelled. She didn't know why. Mommy was always nice to her. She had never heard her yell.
"Why not,Mommy?"
"Because I need time alone, Mary-Ann!" She yelled,tears brimming in her eyes.
"Why you crying, Mommy?" The little five-year old girl asked. She only wanted to know if she was okay. It was nothing to get mad at.
"I'm not. Just...just go to your room."
Little Mary-Ann did go to her room but seconds later she heard her mommy again.
"No! Shut up, Shut up, Shut up!" She knew her mommy was crying now because her voice sounded like it.
Mary-Ann whent to her mommy's room and she wasn't there. Mary-Ann ran to her mommy's bathroom and jiggled the knob. It wouldn't come open.
"Mommy, Mommy, open the door!" She said and fell down and started to scream and cry. She cried out to her mommy multiple times but then she didn't hear her mommy whispering to herself anymore. She sat there screaming and crying even more. The neighbor,Mrs.Anthony, came over. The door wasn't locked so she waltzed right in. She heard Mary-Ann and found her outside her mommy's bathroom door.
"Mary-Ann, what happened?!" The little girl explained the events. Everything from her nightmare to her mommy not whispering anymore. Mrs. Anthony swore under her breath. A word Mary-Ann isn't aloud to say.
"Carol,let me in hon" she got no response. She took a Bobby pin out of her hair and unlocked the door. She gasped.
"Stay out here,Mary-Ann." She demanded.
The girl just nodded her head.When Mrs.Anthony got into the bathroom blood was everywhere. She called the police and Says "God,this is awful but,My neighbor committed suicide."and hung up. She left everything as is and whent to get Mary-Ann.
"Come on baby. Let's go watch a movie."

Author's Note

How do you like it. Please tell me.

Reviews

[Misery]

Your story and your poems reveal your initial style. They are short and to the point. You do not add words and adornments that do not need to be added, and that is good. It takes a bit of skill and practice to say a lot with a few words. I appreciate the dark emotions of your work, and the brevity of your creations.

Please keep writing, dear poet, and allowing your literary voice to grow and strengthen and evolve into its own unique identity.

[Daughter of Darkness]

Thanks. Its also bad that I write to few words. Like, in school, essays, I need to write a lot and it annoys me!

[Misery]

Yes, those essays can be troublesome. I would be lost trying to write one.

[Daughter of Darkness]

Lol. Good thing you don't have to than.

[Misery]

True, but I wish you much success with your assignments.

[Daughter of Darkness]

Thanks. And thank god for summertime!

[Misery]

:-) welcome

[KittyKatgirl]

Naww that is so sad. Good job :) I like how you used her talking to herself which shows that she was schizophrenic. The ending was sweet with Mrs. Anthony taking her away to watch a movie so the girl doesn't know what happened and won't take the chance of looking at her mother

[Daughter of Darkness]

Thank you so much.