My little sister

This is a poem I wrote a year or so ago...it's about my little sister.

You are an amazing little girl
Seven years of age
Little sister

Have not seen you for long
But love you the same
Little sister

Hair is brown
Eyes of green
Little sister

Not afraid to get dirty
Not like me
Little sister

You are a kind little girl
With a heart of gold
Little sister

You do things on your own
make time for others though
Little sister

Your an angle
Sent from heaven above
Little sister

I love you
With all my heart
Little sister

Author's Note

This is a poem I wrote last year. My sister is actually eight now. Will you tell me if my grammar is wrong and give your honest opinion? Thank you!

Reviews

[Keeper of the Night]

The grammar isn't perfect, but the poem is. This melted my heart.