Swollen Lungs

A Poem by TheMysteriousPoet

I'm most of the time,

I just stare and think,

My words freeze in my lungs,

People tend to ask me

"Why are you so quiet?"

I just smile, laugh, and shrug,

I am quiet most of the time,

But my mind is,

LOUD!

My mind is,

SCREAMING!

I wish I weren't quiet,

I wish I shared my emotions easily,

I do not know how to start,

My words get frozen within my

Swollen Lungs.

© 2017 TheMysteriousPoet

Author's Note

Hi, This is my first one so please don't go too hard!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

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Vasilees Sybissyl

I can totally relate to the words. This is basically the life of an introvert. This is a good poem. I only have one suggestion - how about not writing in block? The punctuation and language shall portray the emotion you intend to show us. Otherwise, it was a rather pleasant read. Great for a first time.

Love,
Vasilees.