Petals

Petals

A Poem by Hachamecha

Petals falling slowly down

Petals engulfing

The fragrance prevading me

facind death in the

eye is hard, no?

© 2012 Hachamecha


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Truly lovely, I am not an expert on poems, but I found nothing wrong with this one. It started out with a gentle feel and in just a few words it asked a question most may be scarred to answer. A truly enjoyable piece!
~BM

Posted 12 Years Ago

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 Added on February 29, 2012
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Hachamecha
Hachamecha

Ledyard, CT



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