Life to Relish

only falling

slowly dying

going hallow

reality to swallow

things to finish

life to relish

Reviews

[Kayla P.]

It's short but tells alot...we do have life to relish.
I like this poem of yours!

[Noa]

I love the feeling the combination of words 'life to relish' brings; was this your starting point in this poem?

One thing that stands out is the line 'reality to swallow', because it is the only line that does not have 4 syllables. It kind of throws off the rhythm.

Thank you for sharing your work!
-Noa