Red Ocean

At first
A red river

Then the nile
Stretching from head
to toe

Live
no

going senile

in the end
a red ocean
pooling

in the end
a corpse
and a grave

you didn't try to save
the one who needed you the most

Reviews

[registeredisaster]

sad and haunting. makes you think about the ones you love most, and the ones you should love.