Raw

I don't know where it came from...I seldom do. I wrote it as it came. Enjoy.

It touches me

A flowing of power so sharp

So scalding

That I jump on the inside

My nerves are rubbed

I am numb now

The shock dies

Like the eyes

Like the eyes

And the power trickles from my crown

It drops in lines from my chin

it is like my blood

Like my blood?

Always pay your debts

Or you'll always pay your debts

Blank Slate

Heartbeats stop

Reviews

[Aria]

the imagery is great here. it reads quickly and gets you in a rush. 'and the power trickles from my crown' that line is very intense. good work.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very original and signature. You give vivid imagery and graphic style! Good pen