Reverse Me

Part of my mind just went into inverse...haha...enjoy

Remember me; Forget me

Love me; Accept me

Hate me; Keep me

 

Defy me; Obey me

You curse me; You save me

 

I love you; Help me

I hate you; Leave me

Deceive me

Relieve me

Completely

Reverse me

Reviews

[LanaBell]

I love it...or do i hate it??? It's too awe inspiring for words

[Adela Muresan]

Interesting piece; intense, romantic and original.

Good write.

A.M.

[Valorie J. Shearer]

I love this piece! Very moving, and captivating. Take care~~~

[Constance]

I like the contrast, as the other reviewer said, and it flows like music, if you read it right. Very nice.

[The Elder Pine]

I like it, I like the contrast of need and burned in the piece. I also like the pit of rhyme that you used, nice piece. Is this piece about a person the speaker cares for and hates at the same time?