No More

No More

A Poem by Rhan F. Sydney

I feel nothing

 

You are as meaningless to me as dust in the wind

 

Yet all to often

 

I find myself staring

 

Waiting

 

Hoping perhaps for you to speak to me

 

Wishing

 

Wanting mayhaps for the chance to say I love you always

 

Just not the way you want

 

Crying

 

Praying probably for the brighter days to come

 

I know I am

 

Pathetic

 

Worthless maybe dust in the wind

 

Nothing to you now

 

I love you always

 

Just not the way you want

 

I feel for you

 

No More

 

© 2008 Rhan F. Sydney


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schizophrenic much? lol =3 awesome

Posted 16 Years Ago


Your use of structure worked to give this poem the voice it needed. The halting flow gave a hint of indecision to the feeling expressed. I liked this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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