Velvet Touch

The eyes know all
Under a velvet touch
You see without sight
Hear with no words
Under the soft ,velvet touch
A vibe, a feeling
Loneliness gone
Correspondence comes
From just a touch
A soft smooth ,velvet touch
Awakening the senses
But they do not exist
Steals all secrets
The one with the velvet touch
The eyes tell all
No words are spoken
Taste is nothing
Under the velvet touch

Author's Note

The velvet touch can get ya ,so be safe ....Super Happy Valentine's , Holly

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

It would be wonderful if the lover who, physically, has your number, were also your true soulmate.
Get the feeling, however, that this idealized scenario is not what you're talking about.
Powerful piece, Holly!

[Holly Mason]

Thank you , maybe sometime somewhere , right? Haha thank you again , Holly

[poetdoug]

I love this title, and how you weave it into the fabric of your prose. congrads.

[Insight "MH"]

And there are velvet poems too that mesmerize you such as this one. ;)

[Myenigma]

wow its amazing, i like it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

touch always has much more impact than words...actions speak the loudest...but will words be backed up?

never can tell...a profound statement in this poem...

so glad to read your poems from the deepest part of your heart, again.

[BarnabusBatrue]

i thought i was a fine piece the only thing is a few to many "velvet touch" in there but other than that i see a lot of potential

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

All it takes it the touch of the right hand to melt any heart... sweet poem, Happy Valentine's Day