AWHILE

a trace of you left on a road

a trace of me baring the heaviest load

conspiring theories rock the vein

gone for awhile but still quite sane

earthly being that casts the light

heading backwards looking left then right

making sense of the senseless seems

walking a road with only lost dreams

chasing them, run faster then life

over your shoulder toss all strife

loads will lighten dreams are in reach

but without these steps we could not teach

entities are empty until they feel pain

gone for awhile but still quite sane

Reviews

[Myenigma]

interesting write.it made me wonder,on entities, do they feel pain? our pain? would they be delighted or be sadden from our pain? like demons and angels..

"making sense of the senseless seems
walking a road with only lost dreams"
we always wonder, from simple things like why did he do that, to whats the meaning of life, many times we will just never know.
"but without these steps we could not teach"
nice lines :), all experiences in some ways are important

[Holly Mason]

thank you much ...love the entities bit...truly nice to see you*)

[Myenigma]

thank you, ive actually been on a lot, glad to see you too

[A. H. Pinley]

Learning to live with the cards you've been dealt. Good to see you back Holly!

[Holly Mason]

good to see you fine sir and I thank ya

[Frieda P]

So nice to see you & read you again Holly, you've been missed. As usual, your poetry speaks simple truths so aptly....nicely pen'd! Stick around fine lady, will ya? ;-)

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine lady...*) I just wanted a break...busy busy busy

[Frieda P]

I know that one, glad to see you've taken to peeking in anyways....

[Holly Mason]

dang I didn't think you saw me peekin'.....well just call me Tom!! hahahahaxoxoxo

[Frieda P]

Ha that's your new name Tomolly. ;-)

[Jack...]

Now this is a beautiful morning to see your smile on this site again. You have been missed my friend. Your poem speaks volumes and seems to walk the path with head held high. You go girl.

[Holly Mason]

thank you there Just Jack*)