Sea Me

souls call the open waters 

looking back who will alter 

fate meet my destiny 

all knowing for eternity 

riding the wave of self understanding

cresting and falling, no land is the landing 

sea serpents twisted my soul, you see

taking hands that belong to me 

hurting tender do not go 

hardly helpful of which I know 

baseless, empty, entity

waves flourish for eternity

when fate met my destiny   

in the sea of self discovery   

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

love the way you have compared life with the flow, rise and fall and depths of the sea bringing yourself awareness to fruition ... absolutely stunning poetry..

[Holly Mason]

thank you much fine lady, truly

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely done...wicked rhyme scheme...and i don't even like rhyme...

souls call in open waters, and i am in a sea of self-discovery---

well penned...

philosophically sound...

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir if you sea me I will see you*)

[Angi]

When we finally see (sea) ourselves, it is an epiphany. Nicely done, Holly. Angi~

[Holly Mason]

I sea you *)
thank you fine lady

[Frieda P]

Very profound read Holly, I like that you wrapped the sea with understanding, both vast, mysterious and endless....

'fate meet my destiny
all knowing for eternity'

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine lady ...

[Frieda P]

Always my pleasure dear Holly. :-)

[Jack...]

Very nice my friend. I love the feel of this and how it speaks of who we are, regardless of where we are. The sea is calling us to be ourselves and stand up for what we believe. Very cool Holly.

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir, truly*)