Nexus phase

Nexus, will it be you or me

falsities fly with hate spun wings

next to us the wind is blowing

a connection will be made

will it be the me that knew the them

oh the falsities will not stop

determining factors, shine with no glory

the connection will be...

the nexus of you or me

stand alert, altered thinking

is all about...the connection

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Once connected to a person we wil always be connected because no matter how long or short that have an impact that has shaped our lives. Really good stuff Ms. Mason

[ShelleyA]

Hi Holly. A very good heartfelt write about union... its ups and downs, cause and effect of relationships that can run the gambit. Good imagery. Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Nice metaphor. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Good closing lines. Well penned. Write on!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and when the connection is lost, we will have no roots to tie us together and we will blow our separate ways..

jacob

[Holly Mason]

yes we will...
thank you so fine sir...or should I call ya six line novel..that is a novel idea*)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

geez, i know....lately huh? me and my six liners...where the heck did they come from?