nectar vine

frosted tips of nectar vine

wraps itself surrendering 

lace and chiffon days

corrupted the young

sent forth raptors 

rupturing the innocent

creations a blow away

eternity dismissed 

recess of mental capacity

tapestries on the line

life is a show

episodes are not in order

carelessly tosses the mind

frosted tips of nectar vine

Author's Note

simply non-sense

Reviews

[Cassie]

This is no Non. sense, I enjoyed it.

[Holly Mason]

thank you little lady...*)*)*)*)

[Just Kim]

I like this, I don't think it's nonsense,
it reads very well. enjoyed : )

[Holly Mason]

thank you kindly and nice meeting you

[Just Kim]

your welcome and you too, have a wonderful day : )

[s y e]

This is non sense? Hardly, Holls! This was amazing and I enjoyed it.

~ Noodle

[Holly Mason]

I just adore the Holls...
thank you sweet little princess

[s y e]

Always a pleasure! I love your writing and I love the little princess.

[Frieda P]

I find your non-sense totally enjoyable and telling my sweet friend, keep writing of nectar wine, you're doing fine. :-)

[Holly Mason]

cocktails by a pool...with a lazy river of course....say around 3 see ya there
thank you for reading fine lady*)

[Jack...]

I see the raptors are back... :) I don't find it nonsense Holly, I find it wonderful as is most everything I have the pleasure of reading from you. I like this poem, it sings off of the tongue. Very, very nice my fine friend.

[Holly Mason]

yup those darn quails ....*)
thank you for reading my non-sense...fine sir