Killer Panties

funny fantasy senryu*)

                                                        CANDIED PANTIES KILL

                                              MINE ARE HEADING STRAIGHT UPHILL

                                                        WEDGIES DO FULFILL 

Author's Note

hahahahahahah - ahahah my fantasies*)

Reviews

[ANTO]

I have tasted these (not these particular ones) - and they are yum.
Great senryu Holly.
X

[Traci]

Holly I do believe this may be the first piece I've read of yours....what a good first impression! Thanks for the early morning laugh, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Holly Mason]

thank you much..pre-warning I write and bounce at the same time*)
thank you again truly

[Traci]

my pleasure...sounds just like the kind of writing I'll enjoy. Thanks for the pre-warning :)

[Rahul]

Hahahahahahahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh ":)
i meant....Hahah :) lol
nicely penned.

[Holly Mason]

laughing is good
thank you and it is nice to meet you..I am positive*)

[s y e]

Bahahahahaha, this made me laugh so much!!!
So funny! (':

ah dear, too funny.....
Pahahahahaha!

~ noodle.

[Holly Mason]

dang wedgies*) overtly getting rid of one...wiggly walkin while pretendin to be talkin*)
thank you little princess

[s y e]

Hahaha, dontcha just 'em! xD

Pleasure, Holls.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

I have such a wrong image in my head right now.......thanks to your silly Senyru, that is without a doubt, worthy of every single one of the hundred rating points I gave it! :)

[Barbara Walker]

I laughed out loud! A unique poem about a subject rarely written about, but felt by so many!Great imagery, diction and syntax! Going in my favorites! I thought I knew what this was going to be about, so thank you for the surprise!

[Holly Mason]

you are welcome for the surprise...
and I thank you for your laugh...truly*)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

lol now thats a senryu!

[Holly Mason]

thank you much....glad ya laughed

[Samuel Dickens]

Aw, drats. When I was young enough to enjoy such things, there were no such things.

[Jack...]

Very funny...what flavor?

[Holly Mason]

whatever one was on sale*) hahahah
thank you fine friend

[Chris]

chuckling here

[Holly Mason]

glad for that
...ever the friend...Holly