Fellowman

It came to be...

All at once the world appeared 

taking off glasses that made it disappear 

shiny things cover the ground

smiling faces looking up, instead of down

harboring moments with questioning eyes

makes one wake up and realize

that all things given are the greatest gift

from the tiniest fragment ,to the spiritual lift

entering with sparkles that touch the soul

releasing our angers, letting them go

holding onto the things that should be so dear

loving them loftily ,keeping them near

these are the things that count the most

holding thoughts sacred for the Holy Ghost

our blessings are not tithes 

that cease to be

our fellowman

is all we should see

Author's Note

*)*)*)

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

I got such an emotion welling up in me when I read this. Full of wonder and nice rhyming which works out well in this.

[Holly Mason]

thank you for your kind words fine lady

[Sami Khalil]

To be honest , I love all your writes for they are unique and in a different class . Bravo ...:)

[Holly Mason]

Thank you fine sir...I am still trying to figure out what I write but lately I have joined a face to face writing group...highly enjoyable and an odd thing I have joined a rap battle site...I actually love it soccer mom rapper I am*) thank you again

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[OBWhiteHawk]

I really like this, it is optimistic and shows a lot of hope for the world and our fellowmen out there.

[Jack...]

Very nice Holly. this just goes to show what a great person you are and allows your golden heart to shine through.

[Holly Mason]

golden heart...like that sentiment
thank you fine sir

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Splendid read /write, Holly. You expressed this beautifully.

[Holly Mason]

Thank you mush fine sir
actually when I wrote this I thought of you ...truly did*)

[A. H. Pinley]

It brightens my day knowing that you're still writing. Keep up the great work Holly.....

[Holly Mason]

nice to see you fine sir truly
thank you for reading...

[Angi]

Oh Holly. You said it, girl!

[Holly Mason]

love your new pic*) (gonna miss the Christmas tree)
thank you so fine lady

[Rita L. Sev]

releasing our angers, letting them go
holding onto the things that should be so dear
loving them loftily ,keeping them near

This is so uplifting, Holly! A wonderful affirmation; great write!

[Holly Mason]

thank you teach truly

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Material things have no true meaning, but they sure do fool many of us... temporarily.

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Beautiful, Holly. Loved the line "smiling faces looking up, instead of down..." great job!

[Holly Mason]

thank ya little musical girl*)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Anytime;)