Fellowman

It came to be...

All at once the world appeared 

taking off glasses that made it disappear 

shiny things cover the ground

smiling faces looking up, instead of down

harboring moments with questioning eyes

makes one wake up and realize

that all things given are the greatest gift

from the tiniest fragment ,to the spiritual lift

entering with sparkles that touch the soul

releasing our angers, letting them go

holding onto the things that should be so dear

loving them loftily ,keeping them near

these are the things that count the most

holding thoughts sacred for the Holy Ghost

our blessings are not tithes 

that cease to be

our fellowman

is all we should see

Author's Note

*)*)*)

Reviews

[Andy Ruffett]

When you remove your glasses, your vision may be blurry but you'll see things, different things, just not as clearly.

[Jennifer]

Loveliness, a lovely read. Thank you

[Cassie]

This is so amazing Holly, the message in it is so clear. thank you for sharing

[Holly Mason]

Thank you ...for being you*)

[Luke L]

lovely piece :) Great stuff! Have you tried searching "Google" or a new search engine? haha

[Holly Mason]

I was thinking more about a 454 - 4 on the floor*) kidding
thank you for reading

[Luke L]

I meant to say "for" not "or" lol

[Zahra]

Amazing Holly, great piece so thought provoking.

[Holly Mason]

Thank you for your super kind words
and of course for reading

[lee von cleef]

My grandmother traveled around our world , She carried her "Special things, a cross, a picture or two, a box, a candle, not much but on top of her dresser wherever she was she would sit them to comfort ,to make each place feel her home.This poem of yours placed her dresser right front and center in my library of a head.

[captain]

My respect is on you Holly. This piece speaks volume and good vibes. well done!

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir...lovin the good vibes*)

[john alan willox]

you are so positive - it is impossible not to like this - thanks for uplifting my day!

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir..truly

[Devanshu Rajput]

A poem telling us about the world which you glimpsed. I wish that your wish come true.

[Holly Mason]

me as well young man...*)
thank you for reading truly

[Devanshu Rajput]

your welcome

[quinfinn]

this is immense in its importance of understanding and embracing these thoughts you pen so well. i love this write!

[Holly Mason]

funny you wrote such a nice review you caused me to reread my own write!*)
Thank you fine sir