Good Walk

raindrops fall ,leafs are tapping

little robin wrestling the wind

walking about the green earth

with no thoughts only music

feeling the heat touching skin

watching over rushing waters

nifty things cover the ground

fields of flowers ,scents fantasy

only music guides your shuffle

secret thoughts, good to feel

shaking the head, releasing bad 

ears hear the beat, just the song

dogs barking, horns honking, yelling

no thoughts will intrude this peace

walking along, smiling, sun still warming

good thoughts, good music, good walk

Reviews

[Devanshu Rajput]

a very lovely description of a walk with nature.....nothing can beat the beauty of nature and why, you proved that here amazingly.......whimsical write.....pen on.....

[Holly Mason]

thank you kindly and truly

[Sami Khalil]

I like how this poem is just dedicated to( walking ) which has so many health benefits and sight seeing imagery. A very good one . I really like it...:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Spending time in nature is a great way to ease the soul and help relieve the stress of a hectic world.

[Holly Mason]

and when I think of music...you come to mind...hum wonder why*)
thank you fine sir

[steppenwolf]

A very vivid description of taking a walk in the spring. Vibrant, wonderful descriptions.

[Tate Morgan]

This touches on my own feelings of spring and as i said to Frieda the wind the waves and the sun will shine again .

[Holly Mason]

lovely saying
thank you fine sir

[Tate Morgan]

gday to you mlady

[Just Kim]

I really enjoyed this write, wonderful read : )

[Holly Mason]

thank you for reading truly

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we don't take these walks enough...and then life just builds up inside us and we explode...
we need to just walk and listen and release.

jacob