Cascading Fire

crescent wings of starlit desire

harboring soul of cascading fire

grace with presence of empathy

sounding loud in a forever sea
kiss the sender of patience time

holding close in a loving entwine

certain air will grasp the soul

letting go of which it knows

cascading fire of crystals desire

keep coveted small hearts, liar

strong winds soul, smacking distaste

knowing nothing, stampeding in haste

sea hears only an entrance of care

blissfully knowing in what it is aware

wings like tendrils, rush forward in wind

releasing, rehashing the fires within

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

This flows like water. Beautiful mountain water. And as the mountain water it is just as impressive. I had never read you before. I am about to remedy that.

[Holly Mason]

pre-warning I tend to jump...*) sometimes it is even styled like an ad...I thank you for stopping by...I never ever ever do this but I think you would like my Burnt Out Flame*)thank you fine sir

[jacob erin-cilberto]

time is patient, we have fires within...but strong winds rush the fires and we burn out...we need to tone it down to a gentle breeze...so we can hear the sea rather than the wind.

love this wording.

jacob

[Holly Mason]

love you...can I tell you something silly.I think of you as a sponge-you absorb all that is around you...
thank you so fine sir-

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are so kind.