Cascading Fire

crescent wings of starlit desire

harboring soul of cascading fire

grace with presence of empathy

sounding loud in a forever sea
kiss the sender of patience time

holding close in a loving entwine

certain air will grasp the soul

letting go of which it knows

cascading fire of crystals desire

keep coveted small hearts, liar

strong winds soul, smacking distaste

knowing nothing, stampeding in haste

sea hears only an entrance of care

blissfully knowing in what it is aware

wings like tendrils, rush forward in wind

releasing, rehashing the fires within

Reviews

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This is written in such a professional way that carry the reader along.
I love the poetic devices you used and your choice words.

It's really amazing!

[Holly Mason]

Thank you , hope life is treating you well. Nice meeting you , Holly

[MOON]

Lyrical write , beautiful words.

[Holly Mason]

you got me at ...beautiful words*)
thank you for reading

[Jennifer]

Great speed. Flows beautifully

[Holly Mason]

Thank Ya super much
nice meeting you , Holly

[zainul]

I am amazed by the beauty of the rhymed piece.
Each word plays,tumbles and frolicks in magical way!
I adore this wonderful work.

[Holly Mason]

thank you unsung hero*)*) much

[zainul]

You are always welcome,dear poet.:)

[Chris]

The tones simply entwine and carry me away... I'm wanting to see phoenix arising...

[Holly Mason]

she will...with the empathy of a soul filled with grace, fighting *)
thank you fine friend, always

[Chris]

You soooooooooooooo have my thoughts... The sun just broke through the cloud cover here - quite for real.

[Mark]

It reads like a magical spell being cast. Very lyrical and it has a certain rhythm to it. Enjoyed reading.

[Augustus]

I like the concept of "Cascading" Fire. I like the rhymes. It is important to get them right, especially in couplets and you do. Some lovely phrases here too: "starlit desire", "forever sea" and "wings like tendrils" to name a few. I think you have a very strong closing couplet too,
"wings like tendrils, rush forward in wind
releasing, rehashing the fires within"
The beginning was about containing fire within and the end speaks of releasing it so there's a coherent progression of thought within the poem.
Well done! :)

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much ...truly

[lolawants]

I really like this.

[Holly Mason]

thank you much for enjoying*) truly

[Tate Morgan]

thats very beautiful holly

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir

[Distant horizons]

Another wonderful side of your writing Holly. The woman of many talents :-)
Great to see all the different styles you wordplay with.

[Holly Mason]

well I thank you fine sir....oh sorry I meant B.F.F.*)

[Distant horizons]

:-)