skipping stones

skipping stones

waters tide

love in wide open

with no one, hide

keep it up

figure it out

pour so much less

the two for the moment

makes such a mess

let him go

tread waters tide

evil intent

his lonely wife's eyes

hold him close

one last time

skipping stones

waters tide

love in wide open

faithfully died 

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written. poignant and heartfelt.

[Holly Mason]

I have decided that poignant is my favorite word...well until my next favorite word
thank you fine sir

[Distant horizons]

You are welcome.
ps....my favourite word is Audacious, because, in my accent, it sounds like you've had the runs all day ....Aw day s***s :-)

[BlackRose]

LOVE this. Sad Emotions fill this poem, but well done.

[Holly Mason]

thank you much BlackRose appreciate the visit much

[BlackRose]

Your very welcome. Anytime.

[BlackRose]

And you can check out some of my works if you want. and I will be sure to check out some more yours in due time. Not easy at times finding the right words when responding to a review, lol.

[Jack...]

Nicely written but a sad poem I think. Miss Holly, you are a wonder, an amazing wonder here for me to read.