This is how I review

This is how I review

A Poem by Holly Mason

This is how I review
so we all know what I do

I am not a grammar queen
so who am I to say
if your period is a question mark
with a semi-colon play

This is how I review
this is what I like to do

I read your words
so elegantly spoken
pictures of souls
left openly broken

This is how I review
seeing if I can meet you

I love your words
that you offer of yourself
I see the paintings
with oil laden shelves 

This is how I review
let me know what more to do

I thank you
for your picturing eyes
my eyes love them 
with harmonies sighs

© 2013 Holly Mason


Author's Note

Holly Mason
I only review on content I am not sure about the rest...yet
just sayin'*)

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from the terrace with a view
Holly is the absolutely new
qute-queen of rave-review

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

with a glowing friend
hope it all never ends
with love this I send
oh and a thank .. read more
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

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~ oh... how i love this post... english is my second language (maybe third)... and i've never studied poetry... so... i relate to the spirit of this post deeply... ~ you see, the thing is... there's no writing test that one has to pass before joining this site... and there's no reviewing test either... ~ charlie started this site to encourage everyone who knows a bit of the english language to write and review... both (reviewing and writing) are therapeutic activities... people who have a problem with those who are not "grammar queens" should create a kingdom of "grammar queens" (where they can fight with each other about who should be the "queen of queens" hahahahaha :P)... or block everyone who is beneath their high standards... ~ they look idiotic walking around with a stick saying "write like this and not like that"... i mean why would we be on the internet if we wanted to go back to school ? ... ~ these self-appointed teachers need to get the required degrees and teach in schools and colleges... this is the internet... it doesn't care about who has a PhD and who doesn't... all it cares about is whether you have a computer and an internet connection... ~ every time i add a piece of writing... i get to choose... on my own... if i'm posting poetry or a story... no cops to give me a parking ticket... how cool is that ? ... hahahaha... :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

I get tired of being fussed at for not saying more in a review ...but goodness I just love what I re.. read more
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11 Years Ago

~ you're very welcome, my friend... :)
i feel you on this....i very rarely, if ever comment on use of caps (well, i don't use them) or punctuation, as long as it doesn't deter from the write. anyone with half a grain of knowledge and respect can tell when a person uses them and why they do or don't. these "hardline" critics on here who are so impressed with themselves are boring and obtuse, to say the least, and get no respect or attention from me unless they cross the line of common decency. after i block them, i try my best to ignore their callous stupidity and reckless cruelty. Holly, i certainly have no objection to the way that you review!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you fine sir....no objection + no gavel=time for a beer*)
Let the reviews flow from a great writer like yourself... A very good write with appreciable honesty...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you fine sir truly
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welocme fine, ma'm..
what a nice write, lovely write. your creativity is nice here to see.
well expressed. great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you so
The thing about poetry is there does not have to be perfect punctuation or sentences, it is about the creativity. Some people just don't understand true poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you fine sir*) and when reviewing is a paid position I will take all into consideration but fo.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

I think you misunderstood my review... I agree with what you said in the poem wholeheartedly.
Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

I gotcha ....was just tryin' to make ya smile*)*))*)*)bet you already are if ya drank that big glass.. read more
Is it not what it's all about, the words? Nice work Holly!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you so fine sir...
You are such a wonderful writer Holly, love your work :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

and I was just going to quit...see ya never know what a few kind words will do*)
thank you doc.. read more
I love this

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you so kindly
i love your kind words.....they are always constructive.....but i don't think that you aren't a grammar queen............you master of English through my spectacles................

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

I thank you from my heart and with spectacles*)*)*)*)

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