dream safe

she lays a dream upon treacherous shores

opening windows, capativating doors

tell your tale to the narrow mind

looking, you will seek what you find

hurtful entry, gates ,oh so high

climbing stars with stretching skies

feel the evasive dawn thick love air

rubbing it in for the darkest dare

stumbling blocks of forfeited games

losing to one ,is the winner of fame

dreams are so vivid, casting a show

lock the doors and close the windows

Reviews

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This was so fun! And very true:) I love dreaming, it's one of the best parts of my day! I always look forward to going to bed at night:) I love the wording, as well! It was absolutely perfect!

[Holly Mason]

when I head off to sleep...I have to admit I make dresses well not dresses gowns all sorts of colors all types of styles it is just the best thing and I can't sew a darn thing...but usually I am asleep before it is finished but I still think of that gown when I wake...I must have a deep longing for a beautiful gown*) thank you little lady

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Aw that's beautiful! I wish I did more like that! I'm afraid, I'm not very good at it either >.< I think it is wonderful, people who like to do that! You're very welcome!

[Jack...]

Dreams can be fun and dreams can be the exact opposite, what the narrow mind sees is only what the narrow mind knows. Very cool Holly. This one had a real nice feel to it. Hope you are having a great Sunday.

[Holly Mason]

sure am sunshine only going to be 45 today *)

[Jack...]

Well at least I hope you are smiling high 80's here today

[Holly Mason]

always smiling ....well I could get whiny about the flood warning but I would rather be glad that means the snow has melted*)

[Distant horizons]

And every dream brings a wonderful new episode too. Love it.

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir truly*)

[Distant horizons]

You're welcome :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the narrow mind sleeps, it does not dream...

it is afraid of what it doesn't understand...and often what it does not understand is someone else going for her dream...

go for it.

jacob

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir