Just a Moment Ago

Just a Moment Ago

A Poem by Holly Mason

We often wonder
as parents
Are we doing a good job?
then comes the time
just a moment ago...

My oldest daughter looked to me
and said so soft, so endearing, so sweetly.
"Mom can you raise my kids?"
"I was laying in bed last night thinking,"
"I don't think anyone can do the job as good as you."
Then I told her,
"That was the kindest thing ever said to me."
just a moment ago
Now written
so in my worst moment,
I can remember...
the power of powerful words.
Can take away anything.
just a moment ago

© 2013 Holly Mason


Author's Note

Holly Mason
Thank you for sharing this moment with me...truly

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I do agree . A very touching write and so sweet...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

Thank you truly....she is so sweet!!!and so are you*)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Thank you kind lady...:)
Its that time for me as I wonder myself lately given the difficulty I am having with my daughter. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

mine had her difficulties I found them and we fought them together...difficult at times but we fough.. read more
Okay this gave me chills...wow, if this is true, that's some amazing kid you got there! Obviously you did a grand job....can you let go of my heart strings now Holly?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

exactly as it was said to me...and she is amazing she has been through a lot in life....and here .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You are both indeed lucky and blessed, thanks I needed those....
What a blessing this creative report and these visionary words. Truly, this is wonderful to read. A gift -- a beautiful gift. Thank you. --David

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

I was doing nails at the time so just jotted this down well typed it in I thank you for the beautifu.. read more
What a beautiful thing to say. Good job, SuperMom :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

does this now mean you live in a swamp?hahahaha
Thank you shrek...*)*)*)
Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

Yep :-)
A touching poem, nice bonding by mother and daughter and that's must be for a family. Well penned thoughts.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

like your pic much*)
Thank you for reading
This is so beautiful. What a sweet sentiment - from both mother and daughter. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you for reading my moment ago*)
she feels you did a good job raising her...so therefore, if need be she would trust you greatly.

nice sentiment in this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you fine sir truly
How, I wish I had such a bond with my mom, as you do, Holly, with your daughter. To lighten the heaviest load, which we carry, in our hearts. How I envy you, and your relationship. Your welcome and thank you, for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


therisa

11 Years Ago

Your welcome, Holly.
Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

hello there young lady what's shakin
therisa

11 Years Ago

Getting ready for tomorrow's big shopping expedition, as my disability cheque is deposit into my ban.. read more

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