Snow Day Big Sissy Blues

"Sissy...sissy"

"Where is she?"

"YEAH what's up?"

"Nothing I am leaving for awhile."

"Hey little one, where are you going?"
"Uh I am big enough to leave without telling you every single thi..."

"OUCH!!!WHY DID YOU DO THAT?"

"Because that's what big sisters are for."

"Well I am not a baby any more and I ca...ouch"

"Zip it kid or your not going anywhere!"

"O.k. o.k. I am going to get pizza with friends."

"Geez ,it is a snow day ya know."

"Yes it is a snow day and yes you can go but don't ever think you can chose you are only 12 ya know."

"Now go and have fun."

"Boy guys I am over my sissy."

"I mean who does she think she is anyways..I am going to give her a pi...OUCH!"

"Why did you do that you are no better then a rotten big sissy!"

"My sister doesn't even talk to me much less care where I am going."

"And I love your big sissy!"

"Oh yeah lucky me...I have a grouchy controlling big sissy!"

"You can live with her then!"

"O.k. we will!"

"Pizza here we come!"

"Remind me to get my sissy a slice..."

Author's Note

have no idea how to write the dialogue without any other content for a contest
thank you for not trashing harshly but giving advice nicely*)

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

A lovely dialogue with a sweet theme. Much enjoyed! Thanks for submitting this to the contest! ~ Helena

[Holly Mason]

thank you so for understanding it...my first attempt at dialogue and with no immediate descriptions wasn't sure if it would read thank you again my vocabulary queen*)

[Distant horizons]

The love of a protective big sis always feels like a burden when you're twelve, but how much would it be missed. Wonderful, fun words of love.

[Holly Mason]

thank you so kindly....

[Distant horizons]

Welcome :-)

[therisa]

Only wished my relationship, with my younger brother was warmer, like the one, in this dialogue. Our relationship was icy, at the best of times. You have done great, Holly. :)

[Holly Mason]

my gift that I give the world is the way I have raised my daughters they are amazing young ladies and that is a snowy day at my home....but I battle things I am determined to be a good parent that is my gift it replaces some things for me*)

[therisa]

Holly, if your writing is any indication, you're doing a great job with your daughters.

[Holly Mason]

thank you that means a lot

[therisa]

Your welcome.

[Faolan]

its good.

[Holly Mason]

aahhh thank you truly no one ever comments on my story writes so I always figured they stunk totally appreciated

[Faolan]

It doesnt stink, really!!! My writing is terrible compared to yours! Yours rocks!!!!