Sorry...Forgive Me

Sorry I am not like you,

I apologize for not being able to reject a friend

I am not capable of blocking out, not looking

I am incapable of not caring...I apologize

I cannot in my soul turn away from anyone in pain

forgive me

I do not think that any thoughts given

deserve to be flushed and forgotten...I am sorry

I will not look at myself and see only me...forgive me

I do not think the world of myself

without others I would not know what feelings are

I come across softly with a light touch...I care

and I am sorry

If you can forgive me please do

for one day you will need a soft touch, a light whisper

and I will be there no matter what you have done to me

I would give my life for you even if me, you despise...I apologize

forgive me

I float, watching, I see so many things

some good, some bad

I do not judge...sorry,forgive me

I give advice quietly,kindly,without an angry tone...

please forgive me..I am sorry

Reviews

[Jack Cassidy]

I love how you arranged this. Parts of this sound ardent and forthcoming and then some parts seem to convey an overall sense of desperation. Kind of like holding someone's hand and not sure when to let go... I hope that makes some bit of sense to you. Thanks for the share.

[bluessadmood]

this is so nice ,how i loved the feeling of this..
it may need a little more work on it,but i was thrilled
no i will always care ,your pains hurt me a lot,even not mine
i will look for you for a hundred miles afar
i will whisper softly and touch,even if uninvited
i would give a life a whole strength if you felt so weak
thats me i am proud,just could not sit on the outside
pretending i never cared..how could i..this is lovely
write..

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much like your thoughts here as well

[Tate Morgan]

You need not apologize for anything .This was not meant to hurt you Im sure.We all know you are a good soul.

[Emily B]

blessed are the meek, for they shall inherit the Kingdom

[Holly Mason]

sincere sentiments
thank you so

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~ you are very precious because you're non-judgmental and you care... i aspire to be as compassionate as you... ~ this is a beautiful piece of poetry... it's all heart and all soul...

[Holly Mason]

well I read your thoughts on the crazy situations and I have to say it made me look around and re-post this or dig it out or whatever....so small world that you have read it...a calming soul you have thank you for reading

[.]

~ that's amazing... ~ and thank you for all your kinds words about me... ~ i'm very moved...

[A. H. Pinley]

You have a nice touch Holly!

[Holly Mason]

you as well fine sir you as well

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful and heartfelt Holly

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir truly

[Deuces]

Very touching a delicate portrayal of one with a heavy heart and an open spirit. The many apologies show the guilt in the character's soul. Very deep piece. Well done.

[Holly Mason]

Thank you very much
apologies abound*)

[New Dawn]

We cannot change our nature and should not do so. I also am ultra aware of the upset that can be caused by careless words. Don't feel sorry for being that way - it is the better way to be

[Holly Mason]

then I will stay this way
thank you for reading truly

[Jack...]

This sounds exactly like you sweet Holly...never change.

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much fine sir truly