Talk Down

Who should talk down

to someone they don't know

with a little dear and a forgotten hello

only you on a pedestal so high

you talk so much even my mouth is dry

keep it up have fun with yourself

leaving out the important things

like talking down to oneself 

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

Thank you Holly, this is really good.

[Holly Mason]

thank you for reading...truly

[Brave girl]

good job,it's well penned :)

[Holly Mason]

thank you so for reading appreciate it much *)

[Brave girl]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

I do echo your voice in this marvelous write. So true and needed on this site or in the larger picture...Well penned...:)

[Holly Mason]

thank you kindly for reading *)

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...:)

[Chris]

Ever wonder how people respond to a Title? I saw the title and thought of speaking with someone and bringing them back from some sort of "brink". Then I opened the page and found it was a theme on self-centers and making oneself feel 'bigger' by making others less. Now I wonder if "both" somehow fit...

[Holly Mason]

dealing with this site I have learned to every once in awhile write something to let folks know...I mean what I say what I write and in my everyday life what I do...this is for smaller voices to speak louder and don't treat your fellow man like anything less then what they are a fellow man I was happy to hear from you today thank you so much

[Chris]

This IS a unique ...space - that we fill with thoughts...

[Holly Mason]

I am nerve racked and unique is the only way to be

[poetical#1]

this is very nice way to make that point in a poem its genius good work?

[Holly Mason]

thank you sir so kindly and quite finely*)

[poetical#1]

i believe the tallent truly lies in the wanting to get it out an let others hear it
an submitting to humility of peers

[Frieda P]

Holy smackers, this one just flips you over, shut my mouth! Haha, love it Holly, you always tell it like it is...love that, and this is one is no exception!

[Holly Mason]

had a flip my lid moment*)thank you so for reading

[Frieda P]

ha seems so....took you to a good place, my enjoyed ;-)

[Holly Mason]

very very glad you enjoyed to tell you the truth I write let it all come out then I look up...when I did and read this I thought...Frieda will like this one*)

[Holly Mason]

actually like the whole mouth dry bit gives me a good giggle*)

[Frieda P]

ha you know it! :-)

[Distant horizons]

So very true. People should remember, we're all just people doing our best to get by.

[Holly Mason]

yup yup I really think that people need to zip it sometimes*)hahahthank you so

[Distant horizons]

:-)