A lift

Silently, silence walked out

I could hear again

without looking 

I had no view

tasteless interior

beautiful exterior

lost soul island

with only me

catching breath

sea parted

I am lifting

my heart

into

your

hands

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

One of your best, Holly. Economical, honest.

[Holly Mason]

love the phrase economical I have really started to enjoy saying much with few words...thank you so much for taking the time to read truly

[Michael G. Smith]

Another great piece; simple and bare earnest. One suggestion, second line "I could hear her, again". I don't know its what my mind read as I went along.

[Holly Mason]

it will not look like I am liking the ladies right?*)just that silence is a female then yes I totally agree this is an easier read for me at the moment

[Michael G. Smith]

Or him, either or. Sometimes on syllable can throw a poem as you say into a tizzy. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

something between an uncomfortable silence...

and finally the talking things out...

now it is good...now i can catch my breath...

have had those...finally the heart can beat again.

[Holly Mason]

so deep you are always I love it so
sea parting/gavel going down
thank you my friend as always

[Jayden Ireton]

lost soul island. I love that. Great work.

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much truly

[Distant horizons]

Silence can be deafening.

[Holly Mason]

silence to me can be many things I was screaming silence*)thank you as always for reading